Wednesday, July 05, 2006

Who Am I..?

Original Date of Creation :05/JUL/2k6


Tip..tap..tip..tap..tip..tap
dis were my eyes raining, on my lap.
Da shadows of Sun were keeping me awake,
with my eyes playing da best Music they cud ever make.


All but none cud see my Innocence,
and I cud see evry Eye passing by.
How much Hate can we gather in us,
I cud have made an easy guess.


My mum wud never come to hold my hands,
My dad's away to the heavenly lands,
'Who Am I?..', is one answer I seek,
m 6 yrs. old and cud hardly speak.


Life has become my biggest fear,
I seek death, which seems no near.
Though WAR has ended, but..
white pigeons (peace) have died.


I've nowhere to go, and a challenge to survive,
m 6 years old, who dunno 'Who Am I?..'
My legs are thin, and arms, weak
waiting for death as my eyes go bleak.


The greatest search, they say, is the search for God, But..
I'm Lost..lost trying to search
for Myself, in Me.


I look at the sky, pleading pitifully, to the God,
my fears are intense and soul going cold..
but..before I leave, my message to all,
"Live in PEACE, Bleed less in WAR"

5 Comments:

Blogger Divya said...

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Wed Jul 05, 12:55:00 PM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Divya said...

Hey, this is really touching!
Sorry to intrude, but I'm just curious if its ur personal experience.. No need to answer if u dont feel like.
But this is amazing...

Wed Jul 05, 12:56:00 PM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Gaurav Gulati said...

No concern wid my experiences...I just right on my thoughts...and I harldy take any time to recite ..once a thought comes to me..
I'm feeling gud if u liked it. But, again, the credit goes to u...to give me a stagger to start again...

If u say that u liked it, that means I still have smthng left in me ..as I recited it today only and its been my first in ..say 3-4 years...

I'll b posting my earlier ones as well..

Thnx again 4 wat u've done 4 me.

CHEERS

:o))
GG

Wed Jul 05, 03:03:00 PM GMT+5:30  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

cheers up buddy ... Be Happy

Wed Jul 05, 03:33:00 PM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Gaurav Gulati said...

arre mere dost A.A.G. ..ye bas poetry hai..u know..m always Happy.Senti mat ho yaar.

Wed Jul 05, 03:38:00 PM GMT+5:30  

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